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This one is for the fans of my poems. Hope you like, enjoy!
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I wish to be
The music of your soul
Like the chorus of birds
Serenading you at dawn
I wish to be
The smile on your face
Caused by the sweet nothings
Whispered into your ears
I wish to be
The beating of your heart
The gentle rhythm-like throbbing
Deep inside your breast
I wish to be
The sunlight in your life
Like the mild morning rays
When you open the window blinds
I wish to be
All that you’ve dreamt of
All that you’ve hoped for
A gift of love forever
"...a gift of love"
ReplyDeleteMyne, you are giftef, where do you get all these peoms...
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yes!
i wish to be the best thing dats hapened to u. The one after ur heart. And the one u'l spend ur life with. I SERIOUSLY WANA SAY THESE WORDS TO SUM1.
ReplyDeleteTisha she gets all dese lovely poems from her lovely mind.
ReplyDeleteme to...i wish to be :(
ReplyDeleteI love this poem, reminds me of the book of solomon, all those juicy writings, I like,
ReplyDeleteDon't we all wish to be this for someone who is the same towards us in return? God help us all sha. You write beautifully, Myne. I want to be like you when I grow up! lol
ReplyDeleteThank you all, the words come when the feelings are there.
ReplyDelete@F you already write well yourself. Thanks dear.
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ReplyDeletelove it! so sweet.
Ms. Faithful Reader I love it when you do the poems. I need to comment more on them. It puts me in a place of calmness and creativity for me. I can read it how I want too. Keep the poems coming!
ReplyDeleteMs. Faithful Reader I love it when you do the poems. I need to comment more on them. It puts me in a place of calmness and creativity for me. I can read it how I want too. Keep the poems coming!
ReplyDeleteI love this. I wish to be this
ReplyDelete@Shels, Lady A and Suru, thanks so much.
ReplyDeleteAww...so beautiful! *Sigh*
ReplyDeleteawwwwwwwwwww....dis is lovely...me sef i wish o...
ReplyDeleteI like my ballads light in texture, quick in pace and totally unpretentious in diction. You have achieved all 3 here, so this poem works like a dream for me. Well done, Myne.
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ReplyDeleteand I wish someone would say all these to me and mean them (*sighs*)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem...makes me pause and think
Love this...
ReplyDelete"The music of your soul"...
ReplyDeleteSpeechless.
Well done..your skill with the pen is so admirable.. :)
My head is swelling but I have remain here on the ground. Thank you all so much.
ReplyDeleteWish to be the world to someone.
ReplyDeleteLove this
This is beautiful, Myne. You definitely have a way with words. I admire your talent.
ReplyDeleteTasha