Monday, November 23, 2009

Update + To the one I love (Poem)

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This is to confirm that our next contributor is Realnaijabloke. He's going to be writing from Chinedu's point of view. Was he really an armed robber or was it a joke? Will he call Iphey again or did she fail the test? Check back tomorrow to read and vote for the next chapter. Remember, the first to comment on it will win an ebook. If you're no good at stalking but you want the book, head over to LULU and download your copy now! Mynewhitman's Storefront

While we wait, enjoy the poem. TO THE ONE I LOVE

I love to drink and dine
And I’ll love to feed you fine
I love to dance in line
And I’ll love to make you mine
I love the number nine
And I’ll not see you pine

I love any joke funny
And I’ll make your life sunny
I love an exciting journey
And I’ll love to call you honey
I love but it's not for money
And I’ll love to make you bonnie

I love a good story well told
And I'll love your virtues extolled
I love to see two lovers old
And I'll love to give you a ring of gold
I love you to have and to hold
And I'll love you till my bones are cold



28 comments:

  1. SabirahNovember 24, 2009 6:20 PM

    How come I can be first now, but when its time to win the book I can't make it! I love the poem though and can't wait to read naijablokes's entry! So excited

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  2. Original MgbekeNovember 24, 2009 6:53 PM

    I go loooove ooo. :-D

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  3. velvetNovember 24, 2009 7:26 PM

    interesting rhyme scheme

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  4. kommytilaNovember 24, 2009 7:54 PM

    hmmm me too i wan love o

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  5. Fabulo-laNovember 24, 2009 9:48 PM

    I'll love you till my bones grow cold. Amen to that!
    me sef wan love..well ..not rlly.
    lool!

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  6. MyneNovember 24, 2009 9:57 PM

    Thanks all..

    @Fabulola, what do you mean, "not really?"

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  7. leggyNovember 24, 2009 10:03 PM

    waiting for the next chapter

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  8. AdminNovember 24, 2009 10:36 PM

    nice poem

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  9. AnonymousNovember 24, 2009 11:51 PM

    the poetry pieces are the way i like them... short and full of weight...i'm way behind on the story again!

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  10. NeoNovember 25, 2009 1:08 AM

    cant wait for the next chapter, maybe i'll be first again, will u give me another ebook...lol. Or i can claim the spot against future giveaways!

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  11. HarryNovember 25, 2009 1:09 AM

    love dis!!! go myne!!!

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  12. AnonymousNovember 25, 2009 2:00 AM

    Loving the rhyme scheme!

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  13. BlogorattiNovember 25, 2009 2:41 AM

    Lovely read..keep 'em coming.

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  14. shortyNovember 25, 2009 2:59 AM

    Nice poem,,waiting for new chapter.

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  15. MisstariiNovember 25, 2009 3:39 AM

    I really love the flow of this poem..looking forward to more

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  16. BlessingNovember 25, 2009 7:12 AM

    cute poem!!! awww

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  17. MyneNovember 25, 2009 7:27 AM

    Thanks all, I really appreciate your words. The next chapter should be ready by tomorrow morning.

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  18. JuanitaNovember 25, 2009 7:33 AM

    Beautiful poem, loving the rhyme scheme. Any chace of joining the love posse? lol

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  19. chayomaoNovember 25, 2009 8:19 AM

    Lovely poem.
    I love to love :)

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  20. AnonymousNovember 25, 2009 10:44 AM

    This poem is meant for the one you love. That means, it is addressed to your SO. I no fit comment but abeg love him even after the gold ring. Lol

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  21. UnknownNovember 25, 2009 11:47 AM

    have not seen this. would love to be a contributor, just tell me the criteria and whats necessary

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  22. ReneNovember 25, 2009 1:52 PM

    i'm so way bhine...love d poem

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  23. OpeekayNovember 25, 2009 2:11 PM

    eish you must reaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllly loooove!!

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  24. Nee Fe MiNovember 25, 2009 9:00 PM

    nice poem

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  25. Bomi JollyNovember 27, 2009 8:46 PM

    Very nice poem - I enjoyed reading it! I have subscribed to your blog...:)

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  26. Miss NaturalNovember 28, 2009 5:40 PM

    lol I love that you love and the way you show you love. beautiful poem!

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  27. Miss FizzyNovember 29, 2009 11:01 AM

    I love the poem especially the last part "I'll love you till my bones are cold"

    Did you write it?

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  28. MyneNovember 29, 2009 7:27 PM

    Yeah Miss Fizzy, I wrote the poem. ll the ones on this website are written by me. Thanks for the nice comments.

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