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This is a bit out of character for me, mush romantic me. But yeah, shit happens too.
I got to know a stranger
When he beeped my pager
We later had a merger
And he took over the ledger
Didn’t know he was a forger
A talented artful dodger
Couldn’t believe what he’d done
Until after he had gone
I was the victim of a con
And it was time to mourn
He might now be on the run
But I swear he has not won
Then I got a tip-off call
He was seen with a new doll
I had taken a bad fall
And he was having a ball
I visited him with a carry-all
Shot him in the front hall.
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ReplyDeleteLol, this is funny--definitely out of charaCTER--with all the rhyming cracking me up. What in heaven was going on in ur mind?!!
U def have my vote jare. Carry on!
MW...full of surprises aren't ya. Liking the flow and rhyme.
ReplyDeletei would have shot him too
ReplyDeletelol
loved it
LOVED IT. Right on Missy!
ReplyDeleteI love the rhymes...
ReplyDeleteIndeed, didn't sound like the Myne I know though.. lol
- LDP
Why do i just love that last verse...lol, out of character or not... me likes...:)
ReplyDeleteMe Likey!!!
ReplyDeletelol @ mush romantic...i don't agree...very well done
ReplyDeleteYeah, definitely different from your usual. love it.
ReplyDeleteyipee!!!!!! u shot him? y na?
ReplyDeletelol. very entertaining.
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ReplyDeletei like the sing song cutesy-ness of it lol and yet it harbors such gloom.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comments, I laughed after writing this but it was a gloom mood thatmade me write it in the first place.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked, lol.
This is a new side of you Myne...
ReplyDeleteI like it though
This is so very much like you! I totally enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteI voted for you before coming here.. Cheers!!!
Lol I like
ReplyDeleteLove it! Great rhymes!
ReplyDeleteoh babes...ol'faithful rhymes...i thank you so much, for i loved what i just read...its been eons since i read a simple poem that put a smile on my face
ReplyDelete*smiles*
@Harry, right? *smiles*
ReplyDelete@@cute4u, are you sure? Hmmm...
@Miss Fab and Dee, thank you so much.
@Baroque, glad my poem was able to do that. Thanks for your comment.
Hmmn! Sweet - and GANGSTA!!!
ReplyDeleteChange!!!
ReplyDeleteOn point :-)
i would bust a cap in his ass too.
ReplyDeletelol at Elle Woods. Myne this was hilarious and a fun read. I like the jauntiness of the tone too
ReplyDeletei like this.
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