It seems like a dream
But I remain awake and sane
I tremble at the sight before me
What could this possibly be?
I am as a parched land
Soaking up the drenching rain
I am like a dew-fresh flower
Smiling at the rising sun
It is your wonderful face
So far and yet also near
I stand joyfully before you
My vision of true love
Love so completely amazing
It defies verbal description
Love so all-embracing
It is totally beyond mention
umm good poem for lovers
ReplyDeleteyet another beautiful one.
ReplyDeleteYour poem makes me think of the lyrics to John Legend's song ' when its cold outside'. Good job.
ReplyDelete*wimp* This is too sweet.
ReplyDeletewhy am i confused with the words...so near yet so far?, makes me think maybe its dedicated to a long distant lover or to God.
ReplyDeleteI like all the same, I'm a sucker for anything that has to do with love...lol
@Jhazmyn, it was written when love was some distance away.
ReplyDeleteThank you all, it's a poem for the season. Enjoy and have a wonderful valentine.
ReplyDelete"it defies verbal description"
ReplyDeletebest line cos i think love is so deviant!
mw ur campaign is workin o, got me feelin all melancholic!
"I am as a parched land
ReplyDeleteSoaking up the drenching rain
I am like a dew-fresh flower
Smiling at the rising sun" - i love this part!
I just hateee val.. seems to be what i meet on almost everyone's post. I have to endure, yeah? ok.. nice one.. but you know you always do good write ups...take care.
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Nice!
ReplyDeleteI could just picture that parched land soaking up the rain!
jhazmyn: lol. Sucker for love.
ReplyDeleteMyne, wen i get older i'l jst write like u. Lol
ReplyDelete"I am like a dew-fresh flower
ReplyDeleteSmiling at the rising sun"
could quite visualise a sun-flower opening up to the morning sun.. why a sunflower, i don't know but this was beautiful
gorgeous. simple and sweet.
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