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Hey, Mr. handsome guy
You can’t really be shy
For you seemed so fly
Whenever you come by
With the magic you wove
In our own secret cove
I readily swore by Jove
Nowhere else to rove
If it were not for the fame
Or to keep a good name
I’ll never play any game
But wholly be your dame
If my burdens you’ll bear
Then all your calls I’ll hear
We’ll have nothing to fear
Love will last many a year.
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Hi peeps, how's your week going so far? I hope you like the poem, it was written tongue in cheek and I hope you can see the lighter side of it as well as the more serious bit towards the end. That is what love is for me...fun and depth. What about you?
In other news...I've been a bit busy with Naija Stories but I have to say I'm proud of how it's turning out. GO OVER and check it out. Anyway, before I digressed I wanted to say that my WIP manuscript has been suffering from neglect. I intend to focus again as of today, so expect an installment in my next post. I might actually show off from the second draft, we'll see.
Enjoy the rest of your week and I'll see you over at yours soon.
ps, Have you been waiting for an autographed copy of A Heart to Mend? Do you want to see Myne Whitman? Do you live in the MD/DC/NY area? Stay tuned...
Love the POEM!!!!
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How are you Myne? Hope you're good :)
I love the way you rhyme. I am tempted to write a rhyming poem too. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI love the poem..good one Myne
ReplyDeleteU've done a good overhaul with the new site :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comments. Glad you like the poem.
ReplyDelete@Lyrix, would love to read yours.
@Nwajim Al, I appreciate your support.
I like the simplicity of the poem. Simplicity makes things beautiful. Good job!
ReplyDeleteummm the poem is on point ,nice one
ReplyDeleteMybe how did you write those rhymes,Good one
ReplyDeleteThanks Jaycee and Gidiasianbabe.
ReplyDelete@Muyiwa by keeping it simple, :)
Awesome poem Myne. I covet thy gift :) lol
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Me like the poem.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem! Nice rhyming!
ReplyDelete"If my burdens you’ll bear
Then all your calls I’ll hear"
Tongue in cheek in deed!
ReplyDeleteIt's always the simple crazy ones that go far........
Not bad, Not Bad AT ALL.
like the poem
ReplyDeletetis nice
hi myne whitman
Great poem. I love the rhyming structure. Keep up the good work
ReplyDeletei see what you did there..lol
ReplyDeletethat was nice
Nice poem. I'm crazy about rhymes and you sure did a good job on this one. Simple yet striking.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comments.
ReplyDelete@Sirius, it was tongue in cheek o, I didn't say anything, :)
@Toks, thanks for following the blog.
*smiling*
ReplyDeleteI love the flirty edge in the beginning. Simple yet very heartfelt, good piece.
ReplyDeleteThe poem makes sense....
ReplyDeletevery nice
Lovely poem!
ReplyDeleteUr coming to MD???? What!!! Yay!!!!
hehe
ReplyDeletesexily cheesy... or is it cheesily sexy...lol nice poem.